Hey all, my story is finished and ready for you to read. Its about a boy called Stan, he makes friends with Bob and Bob’s friend George gets jealous. I called it George gets Jealous. Just click on the link to see it. I have left the link to my story plan there just incase you still want to look at it.Bye love Georgie xoxoxStory Plan.ppt Bob and George + Stan.ppt
Comment by //Steph.x.
November 15, 2006 @ 8:18 am
Hey georgie 
Great story:)It was really creative
3 Questions
-How did you come up with the story?
-Was it hard to write your story?
-How long did it take to write your story?
2 Suggestions
-Try and make less writing on each slide.
-Make a funnier prank next time 
1 Comment
-I love you
1 proper comment lol
-Your people on the road are pretty dodgy lol.
[hearts;] Steph
Comment by Nahanni
November 15, 2006 @ 8:39 am
HEy RYlan
Good job on the story m8!!!
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3 questions
-Why did you have a shark and crocodile as the characters) i dont know why just cause
-How long did it take you) all year na not really probably 5 6 periods
-Can i please marry scoober man) hahahaha no!!
2 Comments
-I love it, its the cutest story, i love scoober man
-Good pictures and background.
1 suggestion
Let me marry scoober man in ur story
Thanx rylan George xoxo
thanks georgie
Good job on the story m8!!!
321
3 questions
-Why did you have a shark and crocodile as the characters) i dont know why just cause
-How long did it take you) all year na not really probably 5 6 periods
-Can i please marry scoober man) hahahaha no!!
2 Comments
-I love it, its the cutest story, i love scoober man
-Good pictures and background.
1 suggestion
Let me marry scoober man in ur story
Thanx rylan George xoxo
thanks georgie
Comment by cai0001
November 15, 2006 @ 4:43 pm
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3 questions
-Why did you choose to write your story about friendship?
-Where did you ghet the pictures from?
-Did it take very long to make?
2 comments
-It was very good
-Good imagination used
1 suggestion
-You could have used better pictures if you had more time to work on it.
Love Susan xoxo
Comment by cai0001
November 15, 2006 @ 4:46 pm
321
3 Questions
-How did you make it?
-Why did you have to write a story for grade 4 students?
-Can i be in your next story?
2 Comments
-I liked the characters names
-I want people to be nice to each other
1 suggestion
-I want you to do anothert one
from Ryan xox
Comment by cai0001
November 15, 2006 @ 4:48 pm
321
3 Questions
-How did you think of the story?
-What class did you make it in?
-How long did it take?
2 Comments
-It was funny when he fell over
-I liked Stan the best
1 suggestion
-I wish there was less writing
from Lachlan =)
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